Chapter 14 Chapter 4 31. ", Nyx dropped a coin purse into the open saddlebags on the floor. She pulled a compact out of her saddlebags with her magic and checked her makeup. Bright Eyes nodded and opened his own saddlebag; nestled inside were a lovingly stitched burro doll, right next to a copy of "There and Back Again" and a toy sword made of wood. They landed perfectly across her back. They're not too fond of eclipses, either, come to think of it. Nyx said suddenly. Nyx is one of those OCs whose popular enough that most people wouldn't need to credit her (though it is nice if they do) If you want to argue on which is the most popular design of Nyx, then fine. Her husband was standing next to her; he looked at Bright Eyes in surprise as well. In her mouth was a bright purple towel in monogrammed with the legend "hoopy frood." Princess Cadence asked. 32. A foal's notion of what constituted fully informed and an adult's notion were two different things, as always. When it comes to "gods" of dark and light, alicorns seems to be the most common thing, mostly light. "Ooh, can he come with us? 1,216,126 hits today, 1,595,466 yesterday, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction "Oh my," Grandma Velvet said. A little alicorn filly with a purple mane, and slit-like eyes. "Hey, you're right," she said. 11. 23. Princess Luna's daughter. I recounted our moments where we killed countless of monsters. "Well I don't see why not," Velvet said, looking at her husband. all of my yays! And you bloody well know that, you bush-league muckraker. I was wondering if this ever would make it on this site. Enjoy bronies/pegasisters. "C'mon, Bright Eyes, come and give me a hoof!". Mistaking Bright Eyes' hesitation for uncertainty, the Prince Consort leaned forward. This work's creator has chosen to moderate comments on the work. The crystal heart was really pretty though... "We're going to meet my Mom at the library," Nyx informed him. Nyx looked up at her grandparents. Now, a little black alicorn filly named Nyx finds herself living under the care of Twilight Sparkle, only to be haunted by memories and emotions from her past. This story took me around 18 hours straight to read. Chapter 11 It wouldn't involve polite little press releases where you lot sit around slurping gelato while Celestia's protege' announces she's trying to find one of your long-lost historical treasures. Cadence slugged him in the shoulder. He was almost to the front of the line now, and his jitters were getting worse by the second. "From now on, Bright Eyes, I'll have the Guards take you right there when you visit. Taking the hint, Cadence lowered her head and pricked her ear. Nyx's mane is often held back by a headband as a filly, though when she's older this does not apply.Due to memories associated with her more adult form, Nyx uses her magic to remain looking like a filly, unless the situation absolutely calls for it (or Twilight tells her to act her age). "Poor boy. Bright Eyes stared in awe. "How do we know all of this isn't a conspiracy to steal the contents of the tomb and keep the Crystal Empire under the hoof of the Diarchy? With that, he marched forward, looking neither left nor right. I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS!!!!!! The two foals giggled. Chapter 13 tip: "uchiha sasuke/uzumaki naruto" angst kudos>10. It spans 21 chapters plus a prologue and can be found on Equestria Daily. Chapter 21 "Ah, well, I will miss having my hair done up the moment I stepped outside...". Page generated in 0.258 seconds ", "So they could tell visiting ponies apart from the Crystal Empire citizens," Grandma Velvet explained. Nyx took the strap on the bags in her mouth and expertly flipped them over her head. "Check. But, when the spell is interrupted by Celestia, something unexpected is created. I loved every bit of this story on Google Docs, so I will do my part and like and favorite this story to help the cause of getting this story to the Feature Box. It's here it's finally hear. Chapter 19 ", "Oh." "I wish I could deal with bullies that good," Bright Eyes said, lost in admiration. What next?" Can Twilight Sparkle protect Nyx from those who refuse to see past her dragon eyes and black coat? Oh, God I have waited for this moment! I've been waiting for a chance to celebrate something Fanfiction related so here's to Past Sin on FimFiction commence the fireworksfc03.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/136/9/6/Fire_Works____by_MattTheSamurai.gif. Total duration Chapter 2 Meaning I read this for 18 hours straight. 13. It was an adorable moment. I'm shadow heart. 29. Chapter 10 "Speaking of which, m'dear, you might want to powder your nose," Grandpa Night Light said. A smile lit up her face when she saw who it was. 2.bp.blogspot.com/-W6Xu0PSxKao/T9ZvWt-ilKI/AAAAAAAAAR4/zvF5o0Pvpkg/s1600/zecora2.png i280.photobucket.com/albums/kk188/eva243/bender-doomed.jpg, Im going to admit it i cried a little bit, OMG! "...Sunglasses." "Grandma, Grandpa, this is Bright Eyes, a friend of mine." Bright Eyes asked. "But to be fair, I had an advantage. "Well which IS it, young lady? Fanfiction Mlp Equestria Girls Various There's Harmony and Disharmony, but that hasn't really been shown as an element because of the elements of Harmony. check." Ever since- well, "ever since" seemed to sum it up- Nyx had developed a bit of a bad temper, and it could flare up at the worst moments. You wouldn't have your precious Crystal Heart back. Her standard cutie mark, when she has one, is of a blue kite shield with a slim crescent moon-like symbol on it. "Check. Added to this is her alicorn mane, which frequently tends to be pit⦠Now If you excuse me, time to celebrate media.tumblr.com/tumblr_luyvdgHcLs1r1cj3m.gif. Much of Fimfiction's functionality requires javascript so we suggest you turn it on! Chapter 8 My cutie mark is a moon in the shape of a heart. There was a wide red carpet running across the room to where she sat, and all sorts of important ponies standing in line. "Fairly good, I would think. We do get along, don't we?" This journalista wasn't as easily tripped up. Flashbulbs popped and a dozen voices started in at once. Cadence looked at Shining Armor. RealityCheck's Nyxverse is a set of recursive fanfictions by Ralph Hayes, Jr. using the penname RealityCheck and based off of Pen Stroke's hugely popular and influential My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic fanfiction Past Sins.In chronological order, they are: Nyx's Family: Nyx and Spike travel to the Crystal Empire with Twilight Sparkle when she is called in to update the empire's library. Twenty four hours later Celestia and the Solar Army were rolling up the last of the Gryphon Emperor's army like a pastry chef rolling up a blintz. "Seriously, Ma'am--", "Oh I'm always serious. No more being told we need to re-read chapters... (Also, Everfree 2012 writing panel shoutout! I am not a fanfiction reader (this is the first I have ever completely read) or a "brony", but rather a long-time My Little Pony collector who loves and appreciates all generations. "Common sense comes to mind...", The pushy pony wasn't deterred. He pointed; headed their way was a small herd(3) of ponies-- some sparkling, some not-- bearing notepads and cameras. 288 guests • Cookies ", "He's not mine, he's Spike's," Nyx explained. 26. 6. To this day the Gryphon Kings whitewash the seat of their thrones at the very thought of going to war with Equestria. Look out feature box, you are about to be destroyed! "Wow," he breathed. Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®. Bright Eyes sat there, doing his best to look as small as possible. Chapter 24 "Well, hey there sport!" 30. Follow us That's the only warning the Gryphon Empire had before their little act of invasion 400 years ago got a response.... a nice little mid-day eclipse. "Bright Eyes!" THANK YOU! Darkness in Day. "Don't mess with me, boy. Nyx was dancing up a storm, mane and tail flailing, accompanied by a happily cheeping Peewee. Did he recognize him? Glad to see it finally up here Pen Stroke, sorry I kind of dropped off on helping with it. 19. 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